Out of the three pieces of practical this is your weakest. The image is good, but the layout lets it down. Look at professional layout conventions again before re-doing the layout making sure there is no wasted space.
Your final draft (since acting on my previous comment) is a massive improvement. Overall, your; cover, content and double now fall into proficient on all aspects of the mark scheme. Well done.
You final practical work demonstrates proficiency in the following areas: * Producing material appropriate to target audience * Showing understanding of conventions of page design and layout * Showing awareness of the needs for a variety of fonts and text sizes * Accurately using language and register * Using ICT (Photoshop and InDesign) appropriate to task * Appropriately integrating illustration and text * Shooting a variety of material appropriate to task set * Manipulating photographs as appropriate to the context for presentation, including cropping and resizing
Out of the three pieces of practical this is your weakest. The image is good, but the layout lets it down. Look at professional layout conventions again before re-doing the layout making sure there is no wasted space.
ReplyDeleteYour final draft (since acting on my previous comment) is a massive improvement. Overall, your; cover, content and double now fall into proficient on all aspects of the mark scheme. Well done.
ReplyDeleteYou final practical work demonstrates proficiency in the following areas:
ReplyDelete* Producing material appropriate to target audience
* Showing understanding of conventions of page design and layout
* Showing awareness of the needs for a variety of fonts and text sizes
* Accurately using language and register
* Using ICT (Photoshop and InDesign) appropriate to task
* Appropriately integrating illustration and text
* Shooting a variety of material appropriate to task set
* Manipulating photographs as appropriate to the context for presentation, including cropping and resizing