This is starting to take shape (colour pallet, lexis and basic layout show potential), but still needs more work. In order to get your target grade: 1) Make the bar code a lot smaller. 2) Put issue number, date and price by the barcode (look at real ones to see the conventions). 3) Re-think the typography layout/size on the top right by models hair and the text bottom left in red as the spacing alignment looks wrong. 4) Try the image without changing the models eyes so dramatically.
Regarding the planning blog, the majority is excellent/proficient. To make sure you get the marks you deserve double check you have covered everything on the list and covered things in enough detail. Furthermore, make sure you don't lose marks for presentation e.g. on equipment list post add images to make it more visually interesting.
This is starting to take shape (colour pallet, lexis and basic layout show potential), but still needs more work. In order to get your target grade:
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2) Put issue number, date and price by the barcode (look at real ones to see the conventions).
3) Re-think the typography layout/size on the top right by models hair and the text bottom left in red as the spacing alignment looks wrong.
4) Try the image without changing the models eyes so dramatically.
Regarding the planning blog, the majority is excellent/proficient. To make sure you get the marks you deserve double check you have covered everything on the list and covered things in enough detail. Furthermore, make sure you don't lose marks for presentation e.g. on equipment list post add images to make it more visually interesting.
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