Out of your three pieces, this is the strongest. However, I still think you could do better. To get your target grade or higher you need to do the following: 1) Include more stories and change the layout/typography size to make this work. 2) Try and get some images of bands/live gigs as currently this doesn't scream 'music magazine.'
Out of your three pieces, this is the strongest. However, I still think you could do better. To get your target grade or higher you need to do the following:
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2) Try and get some images of bands/live gigs as currently this doesn't scream 'music magazine.'